Re: Corrections


Subject: Re: Corrections
From: Macneil Shonle (Macneil.Shonle@Sun.COM)
Date: Wed Jan 09 2002 - 19:52:55 EST


While you got the editor open for Mr. Edwards's corrections, here's some copy
editor level corrections...

p 11. First complete sentence.
 "If relation is reflexive" => "If a relation ..."

p 12. First sentence of second paragraph of 1.5.
 "the first subexpression according to (f * t) r f"
=>
 "the first subexpression according to (f * t) r t"

p 51. Third sentence of third paragraph.
  "As wewill see" => "As we will see"



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